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By Justagirl on 04-05-14
This IS Your Mother's Erotica
Book one of the series had just enough character development that I bought this because I was actually interested in seeing what would unfold. Despite the fact that this is just another series with a kinky millionaire who must have his way, I was entertained.
Now, I am approximately 1/4 of the eye rolling way thru this book and I have had all the "thrusting manhood", "Shattering Core", and "Pulsing womanhood" I can stand.
This is one average length novel, chopped into three teeth clenchingly bad novella's to collect 3 credits.
The narrator is better in Submit, but her tone is so low that you really have to focus on listening because any other noise in the house or car seems to drown her out.....thankfully I won't have to worry about that because I have had all the "lengthy shaft" I can stomach.
5 of 5 people found this review helpful
By Amazon Customer on 28-12-15
Sexy,hot,tense,super romantic,loving,family,controlling to say the least. Sub...MIT... If you say no more it would have best described the book. .. I must say it leaves you wanting more,......
1 of 1 people found this review helpful
By knodll on 16-04-18
Chapter breaks way too long
Chapter breaks way too long! I thought my app was crashing! Almost painful! Hope the next one is better.
By Rowena1999 on 06-03-18
Not all bad
Overall I didn't enjoy this book. It's more melodrama / soap opera than I like. A bit of kink (good) but the sexy times were pretty tame. For example, the descriptions use phrases like "My private area." The characters are mean to each other and don't appear to have any empathy.
I find it strange when there are more than 2 POVs.
It wasn't all bad... some scenes were funny.
By NEW NAME on 14-03-14
Grr...I just don't know
In my heart of hearts I want to say I threw this book down in disgust that the leading man Rafe would treat Ari like that...but it was like watching a train wreck, I couldn't look away.
This book has flaws...people seem to do things out of character to continue the plot (which I truly dislike!), people are upset when I can't understand why, and fine when I am screaming at my iphone that I can't believe that just happened! Time lines are messed up, one minute they are taking a vacation after 1 month...then she gets home from a 4 day trip and her 3 months are up...I was confused. I did like the secondary action of the side characters coming into their own stories. All I can say is YAY Ari for the end of the book....and boo rafe! But then I had to get book 3 to see where the heck all this was going!
Overall I just don't know about this book...I think the third will make or break my love of the series. The narrator changed....but I can't say it's for the better! The guys no longer sound like trolls...they now all sound the same and all sound like the girls, barely any distinction. Follow that up with the worst editing hack job of an audiobook I have EVER heard and you have a miserable listen. The chick was speed reading and if you tried to slow it down it echoed...and I'm originally from NJ fast talking doesn't bother me, but fast talking a love scene was just creepy! Then there seemed to be no breaks between paragraphs, or sentences and the whole timing was just so incredibly off. I will have to say though I already started book 3 and I am happy to report that they FINALLY got the narration and editing correct.
I'll keep you posted!
By Sondra on 21-01-14
Needs a new narrator
Would you recommend this book to a friend? Why or why not?
I would recommend the book, not the audio, the narrator sounds as if she is not interested and come off a bored!
Would you recommend Submit to your friends? Why or why not?
No to listen too...boring narrator
How did the narrator detract from the book?
did not bring life to story
Could you see Submit being made into a movie or a TV series? Who should the stars be?
Any additional comments?
get a new narrator