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By Kelli on 16-01-17
Starting to stray from good ploy to sappy relationships
Okay...we I am still wondering how the story will end but losing interest in the storyline....
It is VERY unrealistic to think about sex in the middle of a major crisis.. I thought the story was about saving humanity and turned into trying to lose ones virginity ....in the middle possible Armageddon
Not to mention...., these fallen Angels don't seem to be crucial to the story nor have they learned their lesson from their Father as they are putting their own desires over saving the world. Who the heck cares if one has a girlfriend if the world is ending shortly
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By Lisa on 22-04-18
Interesting Plot ideas / Amateurish Writing
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The overall plot of the series has some interest to it. But the bad writing ruins it. Character development is seriously lacking (especially for the non-main characters). And when it comes to the two main characters (Jess & Mason), the intimate banter between them is beyond awful. It feels like it was written by someone in high school. It's at times over the top syrupy sweet. And other times just ridiculous. Neither character is all that believable. Jess goes from trying to play the vixen, to not even able to say the word sex. And their term for having sex ("getting matches") was so over used it made me want to poke my eyes out. I wish the author would have not attempted to do a sexy-romance novel and instead just tried to better develop the actual plot of the story. The narration was surprisingly good given the poor source material the narrator had to work with.
By CPJ2015 on 11-02-18
Both the story and audio of this book sucked me in. I couldn't stop reading or listening to it. I can't wait to dive in to the next story.
By Anonymous User on 09-01-18
If I hear matches again I will scream
This would have been a great love story if it were not for sex scenes that only a young teen would find interesting. Matches matches matches not cute. Maybe this book is for very young adults and I am just too old for it. I do love the plot it is just lost with getting matches.
By Homebound Survivor on 24-10-17
good book just too much mushy sex scenes. I would definitely recommend this book if sex scenes don't bother you. I just skip them...
By Tiffany on 17-01-17
Waste of time
There is a great plot hidden in these poorly wrote books, but you need patience to find it under all the awkward sex scenes. Poorly developed support characters are sprinkled throughout. I wish they could have reached their full potential.
The main character Jess seems to fluctuate between two actual people. Example, it's brought up how she is stubborn, a few times even, but she's the opposite of stubborn. She constantly bends to everyone else. How is that stubborn?
Don't waste your time on these.
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