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So much more could have been done with this story. It was starting to get interesting then it just ended with lousy plot holes you could drive an elephant through. It was if the author said "Dan is that enough words?" then when told yes they finished it in a few sentences. Pity as a great idea that could have been super. Look at how the book Toys treated the same concept in a much bettet fashion.
I am a huge fan of Jamess Patterson, most of his writing just draws me in and won't let you go till the very last page. Loved every minute of it and the narration was excellent.
Good narration. Good concept. But overall storyline was weak. Ending was rushed and not well thought through. It had the feeling of a story one would write in primary school that you didn’t know how to end so did the “and then I woke up” ending. I expect better from this author. Lazy writing.