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The first two chapters in the book was exciting and erotic but by the third chapter the narrator started making errors while narrating the book which was quite obvious. I also think that the book ended rather stupid I was expecting a little more as to what happened after she got pregnant.
Reads like a reallllyyy bad fanfiction. Like. reading of my immortal level. beware enoby. beware.
Would you try another book from Kat Shields and/or Katherine White?
I really doubt it.
What didn’t you like about Katherine White’s performance?
She kinda pained me to listen to honestly and now and then it felt like she was stumbling over the script. However she did pull off the whiny annoying schoolgirl really well.
If you could play editor, what scene or scenes would you have cut from Tentacle Breeding the Schoolgirl?
Honestly who would ever have tentacles double penetrating them and be like 'I'm going to try to read from my textbook now!' How completely ridiculous!
Any additional comments?
I realize it's smut but there's no reason it has to suck. The schoolgirl is annoying, the plot makes no sense and even the sex scenes were off. Some parts where just repetitive where she just goes over and over the same idea. It really didn't make sense and I wouldn't read it again.